Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
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Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
((Moments of break-down))
Part 1
It was so early in the morning when Kareem was on his way to his college,pharmacy. Birds are singing..Trees and flowers are smiling..People are hurrying to their work..Kareem also was singing..why not?! He's actually like birds or even more beautiful..In joy and ambition Kareem arrived to his college,said "good morning" to his most loved two persons,Sameh and Nada.He still remembers the way he knew Nada with..He still remembers how their hearts talked before their tongues..He still remembers every word,every smile,and even every motion..How to forget?! In his view and also in mine: it's unforgettable..He loves her more than himself..he loves being with her..hates leaving hershe represents every thing in his life..she's his body,soul and heart..Actually,he lives for her..
After a great deal of talking with Sameh and Nada,the three colleagues attended their lecyures,got a fine day and went home
They are always together..Noone can separate between them
except only one
just one
Home,there was another beloved for Kareem.That was his lovely mother..the one to whom he used to narrate every thing,,to complain of any thing,,to talk freely
Her hug was his most reliefing mattar..She was the tree which provided shadow for him..Permanent shadow
Days pass.. day after a day..and life means to Kareem : college,club,study,heavy smoking and his sweet Nada..comfort,happy life..he was surrounded by beloveds from everywhere and enjoying being always the 1st of his college..His life was very delicious until the moment when it turned into bitter
He was home that day when he received the news that killed him hard 1000 times
what was that news?
it was Nada's death
Why? Where? When? A lot of questions he wanted to ask but in fact, he was disable..disable to speak..disable to ask
He just broke down..Tears covered his sweet face..couldn't stand the matter
couldn't walk
couldn't talk
For him, life is not happy anymore and he is not the handsome boy anymore..Life became dark..Deep dark..There's no sense of life without her..without his shining flower..without his second half..He wished if he could suicide..He wished if he could meet her even for few moments..To touch her hand..to look to her eyes..But it's no use of wishing
She's gone
gone and won't come back again
Death was that one who could separate between them
and what a tough separator!
To Be Continued
Part 1
It was so early in the morning when Kareem was on his way to his college,pharmacy. Birds are singing..Trees and flowers are smiling..People are hurrying to their work..Kareem also was singing..why not?! He's actually like birds or even more beautiful..In joy and ambition Kareem arrived to his college,said "good morning" to his most loved two persons,Sameh and Nada.He still remembers the way he knew Nada with..He still remembers how their hearts talked before their tongues..He still remembers every word,every smile,and even every motion..How to forget?! In his view and also in mine: it's unforgettable..He loves her more than himself..he loves being with her..hates leaving hershe represents every thing in his life..she's his body,soul and heart..Actually,he lives for her..
After a great deal of talking with Sameh and Nada,the three colleagues attended their lecyures,got a fine day and went home
They are always together..Noone can separate between them
except only one
just one
Home,there was another beloved for Kareem.That was his lovely mother..the one to whom he used to narrate every thing,,to complain of any thing,,to talk freely
Her hug was his most reliefing mattar..She was the tree which provided shadow for him..Permanent shadow
Days pass.. day after a day..and life means to Kareem : college,club,study,heavy smoking and his sweet Nada..comfort,happy life..he was surrounded by beloveds from everywhere and enjoying being always the 1st of his college..His life was very delicious until the moment when it turned into bitter
He was home that day when he received the news that killed him hard 1000 times
what was that news?
it was Nada's death
Why? Where? When? A lot of questions he wanted to ask but in fact, he was disable..disable to speak..disable to ask
He just broke down..Tears covered his sweet face..couldn't stand the matter
couldn't walk
couldn't talk
For him, life is not happy anymore and he is not the handsome boy anymore..Life became dark..Deep dark..There's no sense of life without her..without his shining flower..without his second half..He wished if he could suicide..He wished if he could meet her even for few moments..To touch her hand..to look to her eyes..But it's no use of wishing
She's gone
gone and won't come back again
Death was that one who could separate between them
and what a tough separator!
To Be Continued
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
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رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
الاسلوب و البساطة فى اللغة اكثر من رائع
ويا ريت تكملة القصة بسرعة عشان مش هنقدر نستنى كتير
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مؤثرة جدا
ياريت تكملها بسرعة يا خالد
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رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
جميلة بجد
انا اول مرة في حياتي احب الانجليزي
بجد روعة
في انتظار التكملة يا دكتور خالد
جزاك الله كل خير
انا اول مرة في حياتي احب الانجليزي
بجد روعة
في انتظار التكملة يا دكتور خالد
جزاك الله كل خير
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رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
بس الجزء التاني ايه
هي هتصحى وللا ايه
هي هتصحى وللا ايه
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اي حد بيكتب حاجة لازم تطلع شبه تفكيره و شخصيته
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بس ميرسي على كلامك
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
zoza كتب:الاسلوب و البساطة فى اللغة اكثر من رائع
ويا ريت تكملة القصة بسرعة عشان مش هنقدر نستنى كتير
ميرسي يا زوزا
ان شاء الله الجزء التاني very soon
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
oshy كتب:مؤثرة جدا
ياريت تكملها بسرعة يا خالد
ميرسي يا أوشي..
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
جزاك الله مثلهفتاة طموحة كتب:جميلة بجد
انا اول مرة في حياتي احب الانجليزي
بجد روعة
في انتظار التكملة يا دكتور خالد
جزاك الله كل خير
وياريت بلاش دكتور
شكرا لمرورك...
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
sheref ashraf كتب:الله
بس الجزء التاني ايه
هي هتصحى وللا ايه
الله عليك انت يا شيري
نورت التوبيك
احب اقولك ان اللي يروح مبيرجعش :lol: :lol:
ممكن اديك part 2 بـ 10 جنيه
قلت ايه؟
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
خلاص بس تكتب اسمي علي القصه بءا ماشي
deal?
deal?
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مابلاش دكتور
أنا عامل اليوزر نيم كده لان ده اسمي في كل المنتديات بس بلاش دكتور
وان شاء الله التكملة قريب جدا
بس انا مستني عشان يبقى كله شاف part 1
ويارب يكون فعلا عجبكم
وأثر فيكم :roll:
أنا عامل اليوزر نيم كده لان ده اسمي في كل المنتديات بس بلاش دكتور
وان شاء الله التكملة قريب جدا
بس انا مستني عشان يبقى كله شاف part 1
ويارب يكون فعلا عجبكم
وأثر فيكم :roll:
رد: Moments of break-down...........By Dr.Khaled
قولتلك جميلة يا خالد
أبوس إيدك كملها
أبوس إيدك كملها
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جامده والله بس يله فين الباقي ؟؟
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فين التكمله000
حرااااااااام عليك تعلقنا كده
على فكره انا لاول مره افهم الانجليزى هو فعلا انت مختار كلماتك ببساطه شديده جداااا
شكراااااااا يا خالد بس ياريت التكمله بسرعه ؟؟
حرااااااااام عليك تعلقنا كده
على فكره انا لاول مره افهم الانجليزى هو فعلا انت مختار كلماتك ببساطه شديده جداااا
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شكراا يا ايمان
وبجد شكرا ليكو كلكم
التكملة tonight يا جماعة
سوري عشان اتأخرت
بس ظروف والله....
وبجد شكرا ليكو كلكم
التكملة tonight يا جماعة
سوري عشان اتأخرت
بس ظروف والله....
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na7no fe elentezar :roll:
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حراااااااااااااااااااام عليك يا خالد ما كانت القصة ماشية حلو ليه القسوة دي :( :(
بجد هي قصة جميلة جدا و مؤثرة مووووووووووووووت وانت ما شاء الله اسلوبك لذيذ اوي بس يا رب بعد اما نكدت علينا تفرحنا في الجزء التاني
بجد هي قصة جميلة جدا و مؤثرة مووووووووووووووت وانت ما شاء الله اسلوبك لذيذ اوي بس يا رب بعد اما نكدت علينا تفرحنا في الجزء التاني
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ماشي يا لودا دراما دراما بس نزله بقى زلتنا
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